My writing maintains a strong, fluent lead and ends memorably.
1. My "Words from the Heart Final Essay" moved smoothly throughout the essay and was sequenced well. The reader should be able to read through it fluently and be able to think about my words in deep thought. I supported my word through many personal experiences that I explained a great detail. I made sure that the topic never got off track and kept readers reading the entire time without getting bored. 2. My "Oceans of Nothing Essay" informed the reader about how over fishing will ultimately affect our people and economy. I kept the reader interested with the use of strong evidence and my own thoughts on the topic. I ended my essay with several thought-provoking statements such as suggesting what we could to do help solve the issue of over fishing and why it's important.
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My writing focuses on offering knowledge through a different view based on personal experiences, research, and complex thinking.
1. My "The World I Come From" assignment gives new insight on myself and the world I live in. It explains the various emotions I feel every now and then along with some of my family + social life. I was required to use many of personal experiences as examples to help the reader better understand the world I live in and keep my topic focused on the main subject (my world) to stay on track. The reader should feel like they learned a lot from my writing and have no problems with reading fluently. 2. My "Two Sides of Paradise Final Essay" is more informative and states many numeric information along with my conclusion I was able to make on the topic through research. I was able to inform the reader of erosion in Hawaii without over complicating my words and not straying from my thesis. Through strong and compelling evidence, the reader should better understand my topic and ultimately take away new information after reading the essay. |
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