My writing maintains a strong, fluent lead and ends memorably.
1. My "Words from the Heart Final Essay" moved smoothly throughout the essay and was sequenced well. The reader should be able to read through it fluently and be able to think about my words in deep thought. I supported my word through many personal experiences that I explained a great detail. I made sure that the topic never got off track and kept readers reading the entire time without getting bored. 2. My "Oceans of Nothing Essay" informed the reader about how over fishing will ultimately affect our people and economy. I kept the reader interested with the use of strong evidence and my own thoughts on the topic. I ended my essay with several thought-provoking statements such as suggesting what we could to do help solve the issue of over fishing and why it's important.
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