My writing focuses on offering knowledge through a different view based on personal experiences, research, and complex thinking.
1. My "The World I Come From" assignment gives new insight on myself and the world I live in. It explains the various emotions I feel every now and then along with some of my family + social life. I was required to use many of personal experiences as examples to help the reader better understand the world I live in and keep my topic focused on the main subject (my world) to stay on track. The reader should feel like they learned a lot from my writing and have no problems with reading fluently. 2. My "Two Sides of Paradise Final Essay" is more informative and states many numeric information along with my conclusion I was able to make on the topic through research. I was able to inform the reader of erosion in Hawaii without over complicating my words and not straying from my thesis. Through strong and compelling evidence, the reader should better understand my topic and ultimately take away new information after reading the essay.
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